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This is a narrated short science-fiction text I wrote on April 20th 2020 after the first few months of CoVid19...

It is to bring awareness to our Beautiful Planet Earth, Other life forms in Space, and Peace...

Music is "Mist" by Odonis Odonis on the You Tube Video 

Thank you to You Tube Audio Library and Editing tools free, so i could actually do this...

Category Non-profits and Activism

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Image was acquired from Artist M Dylan Dee 


Theme : Space Life & Intelligence 

Title: This Beautiful planet

PART 1 

After i seen the object passing by in the sky, slowly but determine, oblivious of having been noticed, I decide to investigate the matter. I had to ask this little Alien what it was doing. Not everyday we had such a UFO activity, in full daylight.


I followed it’s track and found it on it’s path as determine as before doing something important of it’s own. As i went closer I announced myself but got no answer; it was busy taking findings in it’s memory and registering them. Some lights inside were moving but no sign of life of any sorts...this was a robot for sure...a robot world...in our galaxy...where could it be ???


It wasn’t answering to questioning, it wasn’t free of it’s own mind. Someone else’s robot then.


 I though this little engine maybe simple and rudimentary, but surely on a bigger mission...probably a world of robots, organized and functioning of one mind...a world asepticized most probably...without “life” like me or “emotions”...capable to answer or communicate or show caring like our kind.


Following it’s track of transmission was the easiest part...I could ear the whole way the static of noises of different tones, like unpredictable notes... 


I reached what i thought to be the beginning of it’s route...but what i found was incredible instead...


A planet with one asteroid...floating over it was a bigger robot...i investigated it first...no life inside either...a sign was flashing on the door...a warning but not a SOS...


I decide to posted myself over the big planet and to do my own assessment of this situation...i started to record and processed my findings.


 I found out that there was life on this planet...and that there wasn’t a lot of robots, but lots of all sort of being all different one then the other...i found out that there wasn’t any order it seemed in the whole thing...but units of the same kind everywhere connect together in the same rules or behaviour in a beautiful disorder and constant battle...none of the unit seemed to agree together and all were fighting together ?!?!?! What was this planet and how could it still be life on it...


I decide to get closer a little disappointed as i haven’t even been greeted in the Galaxy Guest procedure either...


I felt life but no one was in sight...i circle the whole planet to find it desert almost...i understood that the warning was having to do with the planet and that some tragedy had happened on it...


As i got closer i found such a beautiful view...mountains, rivers, oceans, islands, cities ...all i seen was so different then home but just as beautiful...but it was ill everywhere...and life...where was life...


I found that some life was “human” and were hiding inside the “home”...i also found few life that live outside “wildlife”... i had a sorrow heart and felt sad...sad for the illness of this planet...sad for this chaos that might have create it...sad of the emptiness of such a beautiful planet...i cried and the planet cried too...


As i took a last view from closer...i hoped i had come decade or century before...before the emptiness happened...


Something moved in the long plants that were around me ...I slowed down and waited hoping to see a life...a real one...so i could really tell my own they really existed and what they looked like...a little person “human” came out of the plants with yellow heads, and presented a huge bunch of them to his mother...i felt the love and happiness surrounding them...he looked right at me and i didn’t make a movement, as scared i was to scare them in this incredible moment...what a tale i would have for my own when i get back...the little “human could see me...his mother didn’t noticed as i vanished as quietly as possible to my journey back home...


I knew now they would be fine...



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" This Beautiful Planet " 


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Characters: ‘ Alls ’ species population, Astronaut Human 1 , Astronaut Ape 1, Charity (the cat), Bennu AI Base Command Her SIO2Bot, CaCo3Bot, Her Ag2Co3Bot, Al2O3Bot


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PART 2 BOOK 1

Chapter 2


The travel back home was fast … I couldn’t wait to tell what I had seen …

I reached the base entered slowly, and landed carefully … I was welcomed cheerfully and anxiously … ‘ Alls ‘ were impatient to know what had been discovered …

The door opened and they came to pick me … after walking through them all gathered and cheering from my return and all at once inquiring and gathering answers and findings … I gave openly all my travel and exploration findings at once with pride, enjoying the attentions on me, and this wonderful exchange of minds …

… we were all gathered together on the platform outside my rested flying body, and colors of all sounds were illuminating the place in this extraordinary simultaneous minds exchange …

I kept the details of the illness on the planet for later, and for my special team that would know how to address it … and also about the humans, as it was to be announced in a better formal presentation …

They brought me to the re-connecting facility where I had left my material body before I left … my lovely material self … how I missed you and how light and free I also felt without it … In this body now I can feel the pull on mw to move … I feel I have to be retraining myself … I can I have been disconnected from it … I would have been sure it would be instant …

After few days of reconnections and practice … I finally got the control coordination of my thoughts to my moving … so I could finally grab something as I please on my own … or walk and go places … of course I could have just fly through and this would surely have been faster … but we always been into this obsessive admiration for this form … to connect into this dimension through this body in the same place … not feel etheral … it felt heavy and gravity was pulling down and I could feel it in my mind … it made me feel !!! This … I could feel …

The rest I could imagine … my pads were great for grabbing things .. my legs for walking and jumping … me eyes could sense heat and color vibrations transformed into sounds … my arms could reach to something , and the more practice ones, could accurately, without moving their body, find something or grab something or control a command where you had to use a board only … most envied job of course …

Our Base closed from outside to be protected from the dimension winds and rains and changes … but we could go out too, if wearing a protection cover, not to damaged our precious body …

The more ancient would make new body as they were the most practiced in details work … others would be at the control … others at the base maintenance and others would go outside to collect materials needed to make more Base, body or command items … …

… Others were making bigger body that would fit our body inside, and that would go on wheels outside and have digging arms or drilling ones to get the materials … other would make the flying ones also that would fit us inside(indoor) but without our body and so we go faster around our planet or others into that dimension

‘ Alls ‘ were always curious to discover and document what they could find … but it was difficult to see everything on the other side … in that material dimension … and to understand it … they were all trying to comprehend this material world …

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I was now ready to present findings and attend in my material body … as my peers …

The presentation place was vast area designed for our inside(indoor) material body, as the rest of our Base …

‘’ Bot ‘’ a inner voice ‘interpeled’ me … I felt a mind that I knew from afar not closely and as I scanned to assess who this was … !!! ‘’ Her AG2CO3Bot ‘’ !!! I replied

“ We are very rpoud of your return and your findings that have been already downloaded and analyzed for the presentation … “ she said and is mailed to my best in my heart

‘’You will be renamed tonight … C-6Bot” Since you have found Life !

My material body didn’t moved, but my mind was exhilarating … and my colors started to show my happiness in a colorful aura coming out of my material shell … I tried to composed myself and get back to my neutral self to find myself having deeper stronger colorful tone inside me instead … what was this ?!!!… I wondered surprised at myself …

A new techno they didn’t told me about !? … or my practice wasn’t totally ready …

She seemed to like this and her energy smiled to laugh … but amused and not at me …

‘’ maye you like me ? “ she suggested …

who would not like Her Ag2CO3Bot ?!!!

I didn’t replied frozen now , and was trying to control my colors from bursting out of my shell …

Now, others, waiting that had seen, were trying to imitate in appreciation and were looking at each other to see if they could make color to each other not by mind exchange …

The signal came and we all walk inside and took place standing and waited for the presentation … the ceiling illuminated and the presentation started and they showed the photo of my trip and some of our planet from Space … all colors and lines beautiful … bright lights and faded ones … flying around me or me through them … it was beautiful … Then some strange image appeared and we seen a structure … and all went silent … then a photo of the surface of this planet that was round and blue … all were silent … then green plants !!! the music was changing according to the colors of course, which was the montage … so we could feel it if we could not see clearly the image of this dimension …

Then we seen shapes of our forms but moving fluid … a tall and the small looking right at us … the music got pitcher high and as they moved the color weren’t a clear color either but seemed a hue of red !!! “ Red !!! “ one screamed “ Blood !!! “ the other … and indeed the sound changed to a screeched instead … Intolerable even for us … The image and presentation closed and the light went back on in the vast area we were in … most were shock in their places … other seemed analyzing this

A message came to Thank Me for the trip and great findings I brought back and announced my name now to be C-6Bot !!! I also was promoted to Aliens Affairs Unit, and was to attend immediately after this presentation for some urgent matter … and would work with Her SIO2Bot from the Medical and Discovery Unit, as her team friend …

Al2O3Bot and Her Ag2CO3Bot Base Coordinators, thanked everyone and closed the presentation … one ‘ Alls‘ wanted to ask a question … “ What are forms we seen ? “ he asked

‘’ The blue is water … lot of water on that planet … the green plants … lot of plants on that planet … “Ag2CO3Bot answered in her most informative manners and I was proud of her

He insisted and everyone else was anxious to hear and also happy he was asking what they all want to know :

“ and the ‘red ‘ ? ‘” he continued

“ They are another species from that dimension … not sure we ever seen them on our planet and we are looking into findings to know why … maybe we have not enough plants or water ?!” she paused and seemed crossed how to continue

Al2O3Bot decided to continue for her “They are known as Humans … “ he said and paused while they registered the information and then continued “the red is blood … their energy life support “ he added knowledgeably “that we are certain of “ he said

“OH !!! “ they all said together

Then lights started to shine in few of the Bot, as they were trying to contain their thoughts, and so they were allow to go , and they left in a buzz of lights of minds exchanging about this whole bewildering affairs !!! …

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Chapter 3

C-6Bot arrived at the Aliens Affairs Unit, for his meeting with Her SIO2Bot from the Medical and Discovery Unit …

“ C-6Bot !!! “ the aura color translator of Her SiO2Bot exclaimed … “ Congratulation on your new name ! and thank you for sharing your discovery ! “ she added with a delighted color visible fro inside material body self … C-6Bot was delighted and they exchanged more colors minds all at once, sharing all their thoughts and praises and excitement in confiding about the journey it had been …

‘’ we have a special project that just happened yesterday while you were in practice recovery reconnecting with your material body “ she started to say in a more serious tone and her colors had faded … he became serious too as he guessed it was the urgent situation he was sent about … and he couldn’t be more proud to have been selected for this “yes Her SIO2Bot … please tell me “ his own color translator announced

She turned around and started to walk in the direction of another quarter of this area and C-6bot followed her. They came into a room place with a screen and command board available to communicate with Benuu their AI Base Command

C-6Bot stood still beside Her SIO2Bot … he never came here and never had had the chance to communicate directly with Bennuu Live before !

Her SIO@Bot turned to him and asked … “The human … on that planet … do they move ? “ and waited sternly for his answer

C-6Bot thought before to answer

Her SIO2Bot color changed to a different shade and darker, she was flustered he didn’t answer right away … as he was still thinking his answer she became more upset as her color were darkening but asked gently “ we know there is something you have hidden from us … from your findings … but we seen human shape that moved “ she said “They move !!! “ he color went to a screech almost in aggravation

C-6Bot was almost waved by her comment and tried to stay composed and stable on his feet not still totally comfortable with his balance back …

The screen lighted up and a written message came with message colors and also sound translated from the colors …

“welcome here to meet and work with is dear C-6Bot” Bennu message said

“Congratulation on your discovery and findings you have brought back to us “ the message continued to write, color and sound

“we will name this discovery after your name C-6Bot and it will always be known of your fantastic journey and what you discovered “the message continued

C-6Bot was feeling delighted that he was also to be complimented by there AI Base Command and so he wasn’t personally in trouble or responsible for his new team friend Her SIO2Bot furry … now he thought that she must be furious about other correlations that didn’t knew yet about this urgent situation and that he would know soon … he felt some sympathizing with Her SIO2Bot and her distress

“do human move ?” then the message from Bennuu asked

“They do ! … as you seen on the presentation and the returned findings I brought “ he started with the easy part of the answer since this was depicted already to every ‘Alls ‘

“thanks you C-6Bot, for your answer “ Bennuus message answered

C-6Bot surprised that was all for the question, hesitate then wanted to add “but …” he started and the message interrupted him

“ we know you were following a sos message coming from that planet … “ and the screen closed

C-6Bot was relieved he didn’t had to explained the rest “ we want you to now come and see what we discovered “ Her SIO2Bot said softly and he turned to walk TO a new area of the Aliens Affairs Unit , followed by C-6Bot that was now anxious to find out what it was …


TO BE CONTINUED IN PART 2 BOOK 2


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FEBRUARY 2025 Ms Izabel Langlais